The goal is to learn how to write better.

分析的目的是为了提高科技英语写作水平(不是针对作者)。

Green highlight is used to show good writing.

好好学习：用绿色标出。

Yellow means "questionable."

敢于提问：用黄色标出。

Sustainability Status of Data-Limited Fisheries: Global Challenges for Snapper and Grouper

https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fmars.2019.00654/full?utm_source=F-AAE&utm_medium=EMLF&utm_campaign=MRK_1153715_45_Marine_20191114_arts_A

Snapper and grouper are important fisheries resources, with high commercial value and an important role in the livelihoods and food security of many local communities worldwide. 

However, the status of many snapper and grouper fisheries is unknown, particularly in the cases of small-scale fisheries in developing countries. 

The main goals of this work are to provide an overview of the current status and trends of these resources and to find alternative sources of information that could be used to determine the status of snapper and grouper fisheries, as well as other data-limited fisheries. 

[How to use “as well as” correctly:

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Several complementary approaches were explored, including determination of the status of snapper and grouper fisheries based on FAO assessment criteria, analysis of landings time-series trends, and investigation of whether other variables could be used as proxies for fishery status. 

About half of these fisheries were classified as overexploited, 30% as non-fully exploited and 19% as fully exploited. 

The FAO landings data indicated that the number of overexploited fisheries has been increasing over the years and that the majority of these fisheries are in transition between the fully exploited and overexploited statuses. 

评论：我会用data indicate (present tense).

The Human Development Index emerged as a potential proxy for the status of the biomass. 

The multinomial modeling approach explained about 44% of the variability observed in the biomass stock status classification data and indicated a high level of correspondence between original and estimated status, which makes this approach very attractive for application to other data-limited fisheries.

评论：有心人可能会发现我现在比较偏爱绿色。是的。我发现 我的写作课激发了学生的“找错“能力。事实上，他们更需要 好好学习。

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